1、高考英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)試題分析,曾用強(qiáng)廣東外語(yǔ)外貿(mào)大學(xué),試題結(jié)構(gòu),輸入,,,過(guò) 程,,輸出,情景描述,寫(xiě)作要求,文字圖畫(huà)? 應(yīng)用文,? 具體內(nèi)容,? 寫(xiě)作提綱,? 自由發(fā)揮,功能意念陳述/描述（事實(shí)/事件）觀點(diǎn)看法,,,,— 覆蓋所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)。— 應(yīng)用了較多的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞 匯?！?語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯方面只有少許 錯(cuò)誤?！?有效地使用了語(yǔ)句間的連接成 分，使全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊。,舉例,請(qǐng)根據(jù)所給材料、

2、提綱以及要求寫(xiě)一篇英文稿件。背景材料：English Horizons 第25卷 總228（5/2007）期編者按：本期刊出Lora的來(lái)信，歡迎讀者就信中談到的問(wèn)題進(jìn)行分析并提出建議。 Dear editor. I’m a senior high school student,and I want to work part-time this summer. I think it is good to do

3、so,but my parents don’t agree with me I just can’t understand them I need your advice.

4、 Lora要求：1.短文

5、須寫(xiě)在答題卡的指定區(qū)域。 2.短文詞數(shù)不少于80（不含已寫(xiě)好的部 分）。 3.內(nèi)容充實(shí)，結(jié)構(gòu)完整，語(yǔ)意連貫。 4.書(shū)寫(xiě)須清晰、工整。提綱：第1段：Lora利用暑假打工的理由 第2段：Lora父母不同意的理由 第3段：你給Lora的具體建議,內(nèi)容構(gòu)思：主題集中 內(nèi)容關(guān)聯(lián)語(yǔ)言表達(dá)：意義明確 句式

6、準(zhǔn)確連句成篇：結(jié)構(gòu)銜接 意義連貫,,,,舉例,學(xué)生作文分析,Clothing’s Uses Throughout the word, clothing has many uses. It is used to provide protection from the elements. It also is worn to prevent others from seeing specific parts of one’

7、s body. Some clothing is worn to provide supernatural protection. Today clothing is all kinds of different. Most of them are very beautiful. Women like beautiful clothing and men too. People in all cultures use clo

8、thing and other forms of bodily decoration to communicate status, intentions and other messages. Clothing is faction. Different people like different clothing. A clothing likes a people. It has different advantages

9、and the same people. one clothing can point out one people’s advantages and disadvantages. And when the weather is hot, we can wear clothing which can make us feel cool. When the weather is cold, it can make us feel

10、 warm. Clothing has many uses. I like clothing!,學(xué)生作文分析,Clothing and Status The deepest impression Text A makes on me is that: “People in all cultures use clothing and other forms of bodily decoration to communicat

11、e status, intentions and other messages.” The author told us that throughout the world, clothing has many uses, but clothing also stand for status and other messages. These days, people who do manual work often recei

12、ve far more money than people who work in offices. People who work in offices often called “white-collar workers”, for they always wear white collar and tie to go to work. But many people are willing to work in office in

13、stead of a manual worker. Why? Just for increasing their social status. Take a man for example, he worked on the company as a cleaner. People called him “Bloggs”. His salary was higher than any other white collar worke

14、rs. But he, changed for a job as a white collar last week. What’s worse, his salary only equal half of a cleaner. Yet he was statisfied with the job, people never called “Bloggs”, called him “Mr. Alf”. His social status

15、increased, while his salary was reduced. It is commonly believe that wear a lucky shirt to take an exam is calling for supernatural assistance. That is to say, clothing can create extrordianry power as well. In addit

16、ion, we begin to tell the differences between the poor and the rich by clothing. Thus, clothing plays an important role in social activities. Thus choose a better clothing when you go to a party, which will increase yo

17、ur status.,一、形式From my personal perspective, I firmly think my perents [拼寫(xiě)] always be [詞形變化] my idol because they treat me always well and give me deep love.Boys and girls have different idol [詞形變化], but they have the

18、same idol is famous people.Boys and girls all like important people, and boy [詞形變化] like sports star than girls. I have idol sport star [詞形變化] because they sport is very well, I like sport. To our surprise, there are

19、almost 50 percent of girl students treat the TV stars as their idols, while there are only 14 percent of boy student [詞形變化] treat the TV stars as their idols.The girls likes [主謂一致] the stars than the sports men and the

20、 boys likes [主謂一致] the sports men than likes the stars.,試題,學(xué)生作文分析,二、結(jié)構(gòu)From my personal perspective, I firmly think my perents [拼寫(xiě)] always be [詞形變化] my idol because they treat me always well and give me deep love. [句子結(jié)構(gòu):

21、語(yǔ)序] Boys and girls have different idol [詞形變化], but they have the same idol is famous people [句子結(jié)構(gòu):結(jié)構(gòu)].Boys and girls all like important people, and boy [詞形變化] like sports star than girls [句子結(jié)構(gòu):不完整]. I have idol sport

22、star [詞形變化] because they sport is very well [句子結(jié)構(gòu):詞性], I like sport. To our surprise, there are almost 50 percent of girl students treat the TV stars as their idols, while there are only 14 percent of boy student [詞形變化]

23、 treat the TV stars as their idols.The girls likes [主謂一致] the stars than the sports men and the boys likes [主謂一致] the sports men than likes the stars [句子結(jié)構(gòu):結(jié)構(gòu)].,試題,學(xué)生作文分析,三、意義However, their parents are only the second

24、 idol for the girls and the third idols for the boys. [不夠準(zhǔn)確]Last week,we made a survey among 2600 students for a topic which was that who is your idol. [不夠簡(jiǎn)練]The same point between boys and girls is the same percentage

25、 of Great men, but little different is the place [用詞不當(dāng)].The idol of great people were the same, which was about 18% of girls or boys and there were 1% of boys haven’t any idols. [語(yǔ)義關(guān)系混淆]From the survey, there are more

26、girls like film stars while more boys like sport stars. [不符邏輯] I no idol, I think I was best good. [漢式英語(yǔ)],試題,學(xué)生作文分析,寫(xiě)作能力的培養(yǎng),詞,短語(yǔ),句,篇,同現(xiàn)關(guān)系詞,詞語(yǔ)搭配,句法(句型)結(jié)構(gòu),篇章連貫,,,,,How should one invest a sum of money in these days of inf

27、lation (通貨膨脹)? Left in a bank it will hardly keep its value, however high the interest rate. Only a brave man, or a very rich one, dares to buy and sell on the Stock Market. Today it seems that one of the best ways to pr

28、otect your savings and even increase your wealth is to buy beautiful objects from the past. Here I am going to offer some advice on collecting antique clocks, which I personally consider as one of the most interesting of

29、 antiques.,How should one invest a sum of money in these days of inflation (通貨膨脹)? Left in a bank it will hardly keep its value, however high the interest rate. Only a brave man, or a very rich one, dares to buy and sell

30、 on the Stock Market. Today it seems that one of the best ways to protect your savings and even increase your wealth is to buy beautiful objects from the past. Here I am going to offer some advice on collecting antique c

31、locks, which I personally consider as one of the most interesting of antiques.,How should one invest a sum of money in these days of inflation (通貨膨脹)? Left in a bank it will hardly keep its value, however high the intere

32、st rate. Only a brave man, or a very rich one, dares to buy and sell on the Stock Market. Today it seems that one of the best ways to protect your savings and even increase your wealth is to buy beautiful objects from th

33、e past. Here I am going to offer some advice on collecting antique clocks, which I personally consider as one of the most interesting of antiques.,Friends形容詞搭配best, bosom, close, dear, good, great, intimate, real, spec

34、ialHer best friend at school was called Anna.I’m inviting only my closest friends to the party.faithful, loyal, true, lifelong, long-standing, oldIt was so relaxing to be among old friends.動(dòng)詞搭配become, remain, stay