1、答案提供詳盡解析，旨在指導(dǎo)考生拓展寫(xiě)作思路，提升寫(xiě)作能力。答案提供詳盡解析，旨在指導(dǎo)考生拓展寫(xiě)作思路，提升寫(xiě)作能力。讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)專(zhuān)練讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)專(zhuān)練(一)A(2018金麗衢十二校高三第二次聯(lián)考金麗衢十二校高三第二次聯(lián)考)閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫(xiě)，使之構(gòu)閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫(xiě)，使之構(gòu)成一個(gè)完整的故事。成一個(gè)完整的故事。ItwasanunusuallyquietdayintheemergencyroomonDecember25

2、.Quietthatisexceptfthosewhowerestingaroundthenurses’stationcomplainingabouthavingtowkChristmasDay.Iwastriagenursethatdayhadjustbeenouttothewaitingroomtocleanup.Justthenfivebodiesshowedupatmytriagedeskapalewomanfoursmallc

3、hildren.“Areyouallsick？”Iaskedsuspiciously.“Yes，”shesaidweaklyloweredherhead.Butwhenitcametodeionsoftheirpresentproblemsthingsgotalittlevague.Twoofthechildrenhadheadachesbuttheheadachesweren’taccompaniedbythenmalbodylang

4、uageofholdingtheheadtryingtokeepitstill.Twochildrenhadearachesbutonlyonecouldtellmewhichearwasaffected.Themothercomplainedofacoughbutseemedtowktoproduceit.SomethingwaswrongbutIdidn’tsayanything.Iexplainedtothemotherthati

5、tmightbealittlewhilebefeadoctsawher.Sheresponded“Takeyourtimeit’swarminhere.”Sheturnedwithasmileguidedherchildrenintothewaitingroom.Onahunch(callitnursingjudgment)Icheckedthetaftertheadmittingclerkhadfinishedregisteringt

6、hefamily.Noaddress—theywerehomeless.Thewaitingroomwaswarm.IlookedoutatthefamilyhuddledbytheChristmastree.Thesmallestonewaspointingatthetelevisionexclaimingsomethingtohermother.Theoldestonewaslookingatherreflectioninadeca

7、tionontheChristmastree.Iwentbacktothenurses’stationmentionedwehadahomelessfamilyinthewaitingroom.ThenursescomplainingaboutwkingChristmasturnedtocompassionfafamilyjusttryingtogetwarmonChristmas.Thenourteamwentintoactionmu

8、chaswedowhenthere’samedicalemergency.ButthisonewasaChristmasemergency.AspecialChristmaspartywastobeheld.注意：注意：1所續(xù)寫(xiě)短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為所續(xù)寫(xiě)短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；左右；2至少使用至少使用5個(gè)短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)；個(gè)短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)；3續(xù)寫(xiě)部分分為兩段，每段的開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)已為你寫(xiě)好；續(xù)寫(xiě)部分分為兩段，每段的開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)已為你

9、寫(xiě)好；圣誕節(jié)這一天在醫(yī)院可以領(lǐng)取免費(fèi)餐，很可能他們用這個(gè)機(jī)會(huì)為聚會(huì)準(zhǔn)備了食物。過(guò)圣誕圣誕節(jié)這一天在醫(yī)院可以領(lǐng)取免費(fèi)餐，很可能他們用這個(gè)機(jī)會(huì)為聚會(huì)準(zhǔn)備了食物。過(guò)圣誕節(jié)還需要準(zhǔn)備禮物，可以寫(xiě)護(hù)士們?nèi)绾蜗朕k法準(zhǔn)備禮物。這一段主要描述護(hù)士們精心準(zhǔn)備節(jié)還需要準(zhǔn)備禮物，可以寫(xiě)護(hù)士們?nèi)绾蜗朕k法準(zhǔn)備禮物。這一段主要描述護(hù)士們精心準(zhǔn)備的過(guò)程。續(xù)寫(xiě)第二段：聚會(huì)結(jié)束，這一家人準(zhǔn)備離開(kāi)。這樣的場(chǎng)合可以描寫(xiě)這一家人的感的過(guò)程。續(xù)寫(xiě)第二段：聚會(huì)結(jié)束，這一家人準(zhǔn)備離

10、開(kāi)。這樣的場(chǎng)合可以描寫(xiě)這一家人的感受和反應(yīng)。他們內(nèi)心一定是充滿感激的，也一定會(huì)通過(guò)言語(yǔ)和行為表達(dá)這種感激之情。同受和反應(yīng)。他們內(nèi)心一定是充滿感激的，也一定會(huì)通過(guò)言語(yǔ)和行為表達(dá)這種感激之情。同時(shí)，可以考慮護(hù)士們的反應(yīng)和感受，對(duì)照文章一開(kāi)始的抱怨，護(hù)士們此刻的內(nèi)心應(yīng)該也是時(shí)，可以考慮護(hù)士們的反應(yīng)和感受，對(duì)照文章一開(kāi)始的抱怨，護(hù)士們此刻的內(nèi)心應(yīng)該也是感動(dòng)和幸福的。感動(dòng)和幸福的。(4)結(jié)合下劃線詞語(yǔ)羅列寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)。結(jié)合下劃線詞語(yǔ)羅列寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)。結(jié)合

11、下劃線詞語(yǔ)和短文內(nèi)容，展開(kāi)盡可能豐富的想象，羅列出盡可能多的故事發(fā)展情結(jié)合下劃線詞語(yǔ)和短文內(nèi)容，展開(kāi)盡可能豐富的想象，羅列出盡可能多的故事發(fā)展情節(jié)。例如，第一段可以通過(guò)提出以下問(wèn)題來(lái)獲取寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)：節(jié)。例如，第一段可以通過(guò)提出以下問(wèn)題來(lái)獲取寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)：WhatdidthenursesprepareftheChristmaspartyHowdidthenursesgetwhattheyneededfthepartyinsuchashttime

12、WherewasthepartyheldWhatdidthefamilydointhepartyDidtheyenjoytheparty第二段可以通過(guò)提出以下問(wèn)題來(lái)獲取寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)：第二段可以通過(guò)提出以下問(wèn)題來(lái)獲取寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)：HowdidthefamilyfeelafterthepartyWhatdidtheysaytothenurseswhentheyleftWhatdidtheydowhentheyleftHowdidthenursesf

13、eelwhenthefamilyleftDidtheystillcomplainaboutwkingonChristmasDay二、參考范文二、參考范文Paragraph1：WewereallofferedafreemealinthehospitalcafeteriaonChristmasDaysoweaskedfthatmealpreparedabanquetfourChristmasguests.Wealsoneededpresen

14、tssoweputtogetherciesfruitsotherthingsavailablefromdifferentapartments.RushinginoutofthewaitingroomourteammadegreatefftstomakeawarmpartytomeettheneedsofthehomelessfamilywhojustwantedtowarmthemselvesonChristmasDay.Paragra

15、ph2：Whenthepartyendedasthefamilywalkedtothedotoleavethemothercamerunningbackgavemeahugwhispered“Thanksfbeingourangelstoday.”Asshegotbacktoherchildrentheyallwavedonemetime.Insidethenurses’stationtherestoodagroupofnurseswi